Lovestruck (Draco Malfoy Love story)
Its about Bambi a hogwarts seventh year and Draco.
Chapter 1
Hey!My name is Dabria Kathrine Ashleigh Tucker-Price, but everyone calls me Bambi because of my big green eyes.I have Long sun kissed golden hair that falls into perfect curls and sun kissed clear skin and I amslim, but have perfect curves in all of the right places.I attend howarts and am in Gryfindore, in my seventh year.I wear MINISKIRTS or shorts everyday and sometimes tight skinny jeans, cool DRESSES, i wear TOPS, SCARVES, necklaces, HIGH HEELS.I love TARTAN clothes especially dresses n skirts.I paint my NAILS everyday and wear a little bit of make up, just fondation, blue eyeliner(not alot I dont want to look like a f^king emo), eyeshadow and lipgloss.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe!) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!"Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped.
Candi gasped and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo!And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!"
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths"I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it. I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy."
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe!) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!"Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped.
Candi gasped and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo!And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!"
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths"I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it. I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy."
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal.



576 Comments
Hey Hun,
A bit of advise;spell check is really quite helpful when you write and insulting emos isn't nice:)And you could shorten the main characters names, I mean really have you ever met anyone with names that long(other than Dumbledore^.^).
Good luck with the story,
Teagz:)
Wasn't I just the sweetest person saying that and then I get ignored-_-
Yeah, it looks like she wrote the second chapter just by sitting on the keyboard and rubbing her butt all over it.
I have a really long name like that >;/
it realy does look like she sat on the keybord.
AND DONT INSULT EMOS!!
i agree with the whole emo thing. and also JAMES POTTER IS DEAD. if you loved harry potter so much, how do you NOT know that?!?!?
LAWL U GUYS CRACK ME UPP XD im too fat to risk sitting on the keybord XD
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Why???
That isn't very nice!
She read your... Umm... I think this is supposed to be called a story...
because i wanna know if my stuff is any good
Wow... Just.. Wow... I've only seen one other story as... Erm... Original... As this...
Have you ever read My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie?
If you have... That explains a lot.
wtf is my immortal??
It's a fanfiction...
Lol yes! This reminds me of that "goffick" stuff lol gotta love My Immortal. The commentary kicks azz
Are you sure this isn't Tara Gilesbie? I think it just might be.
i havent but i will now???
haha
whats so funny?
lol... No offence, but this is one of the worst stories I've ever read... I have no clue what the second chapter was about. Do you know how to use the backspace button? Please... Try harder. Please.
I laughed....
Me too! A very confused, WTF kind of laugh
IKR!
What the freak!?!?!?!?! that was crazy seriously!!! not to mention confusing??
What just happened....?
I'm usually good at reading confusing stuff... Advanced scientific theories, religious views, celebrity gossip, Tara Gilesbie's My Immortal... The second chapter of this story has to be one of the most confusing of all the things I have ever read. Even if things were spelled correctly and the backspace on your keyboard was actually put to use, I still wouldn't know what happened. This story, so far, has given me a good reason to say, "What the hell is going on here?!" Add in Enoby and we're set.
Fangs to you lol
LOL! At least this girl isn't saying "Geddit" yet! XD